Bookish Blerd

This was really good. The writing was good and the story interesting. The transition from Leo half out of it in bed to him hobbling around making breakfast was too quick. It wasn't really a transition; he was in bed and then he wasn't. Also the idea of him hobbling through the woods, up a mountain in the dark because he was worried about a man he described as being a bear who could handle himself and knew the territory was a little "what?!" but the thought behind it was genuine. He was worried about Kirk and it was sweet. I'm happy the author went back to the danger Kirk had smelled in town; it wasn't just something mentioned off-handed and never brought up again. I'm looking forward to the next novella to see how things turn out with Leo and Kirk and just what is the "danger".